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Magnetic Poetry Number 5 or Park.

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Ok so this one kind of just took off running. It's a little cluttered I feel but the words, hopefully, are clear enough. I had to add in some extra little spacers so the words didn't run into each other, so for "me nervous" rather than it reading "menervous" and "of lacklustre" so it didn't read "oflacklustre".  Hope that's ok!

Here it is typed out:

Bring me down slow,
No sudden landings.
You ought to know, these misunderstandings in
Familiar places are making me nervous.
So many cases 
Of lacklustre nurses.

Inspired by :iconfridgepoetproject:
Poem by me :) (Smile) :iconplugin848y:
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Oh, sweet -- the ones that just "take off running" are THE best!!  I particularly love the tumbling musicality of "no sudden landings / you ought to know, these misunderstandings," and I for sure appreciate all the detailed tiling that went into this -- especially that last line!  :faint:  Awesome stuff!  :highfive: