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Daily Magnet Poetry Number 2 or Falling

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2nd ever poem made from tiny magnets!

These ones have a bit of a posh background in the form of some old wrapping paper! :D


I lined the bottom of the tin they came in so even if I'm away from my fridge, they'll have somewhere to go!

As always, constructive criticism is welcomed, encouraged and listened to, so do please feel free! :D

Here it is typed out: (this one has no punctuation at all)

in over his head

love               purple and blue

a    bruised petal


Inspired by :iconfridgepoetproject:
Poem by me :) :iconplugin848y:
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A glorious second mini-magnetic masterpiece, indeed!!!  So poignant and raw; I adore that last line -- "a bruised petal."  Such a simple image that nonetheless captures an entire vivid emotional spectrum of vulnerability, fragility, and pain.  I love the wrapping-paper background, too!  You are on a roll, my dear!!  

And I have the distinct pleasure of featuring this wee magnetic beauty on the Official Blog once again, over here.  :la: Awesome work!!  :highfive: